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发表于 2011-9-10 22:46 | 只看该作者

（学习帖）post to learn English everyday

本帖最后由 锣声若响 于 2011-9-21 17:01 编辑

咣！开个帖用来学英语了…有一块儿的没？有愿意给俺当老师的没？===================
I am going to learn English now, is anyone together? is anyone would teach me as a teacher?
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I like to learn English.  Is anyone else interested?  Does anyone like to be my teacher?
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曾几何时他们说，我原是一面锣。
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本帖最后由 锣声若响 于 2011-9-21 17:01 编辑

Morning guys, its rainning now, I am going to take a bus, then go home, happy Autome(how to spell? I think iam wrong here) Day! enjoy your time!
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早安，各位！这场雨下得没完没了了，俺准备赶车回家，大家中秋节快乐！
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Good morning guys! It’s raining now. I am going to take a bus home. Happy Zhong-Qiu’s Day (How to spell? I think I am wrong here)! Enjoy your day!
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本帖最后由 锣声若响 于 2011-9-21 17:01 编辑

I am on the way, rain is really big, would the sky broke? maybe i think, I am so worry :)
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俺在回家的路上了，雨真大，天会被下塌吗？我想会的，我很担心啊，哈哈
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I am on the way home. The rain is really heavy. Could the sky fall? I think so. I am so worry.
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本帖最后由 锣声若响 于 2011-9-21 17:02 编辑

Oh, how ashamed! I just checked the Google Translate,  tomorrow should be called "Mid-Autumn Day", i am wrong on Floor 2 :(
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Oops, I made a mistake! I just checked the Google Translate. Tomorrow should be called "the Mid-Autumn Day". I was wrong on Floor 2 :(
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It is called the Moon Festival or the Mid-Autumn Festival.
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Festival? oh, i had remember, thanks :)
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发表于 2011-9-11 22:00 | 只看该作者
本帖最后由 ~~windflower~~ 于 2011-9-14 20:47 编辑

Gong is a good boy !
想问天问大地,或者是迷信问问宿命
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发表于 2011-9-12 10:56 | 只看该作者
老师曰：几个简单的语法
- 每个整句结尾时一定要用句号 It is raining now.
- 正式书写文体不要用简写或者省略号 it's--it is
- 句子开头一定要用大写 Are you...
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Gung is a good boy !~~windflower~~ 发表于 2011-9-11 22:00
Thanks.
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本帖最后由 锣声若响 于 2011-9-21 17:02 编辑

The rain stoped. But the sun didn't come out of the wind. The weather was feeled well. The dog is sleeping under my chair. :) I will go to Xi'an after the lunch.
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The rain stopped but it is still windy and cloudy. Weather feels nice. The dog is sleeping under my chair. I am going to Xi'an after lunch.
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